This is our final ides for the script. We had to make a lot of changes as originally it was a lot longer and emma and Harry had a longer conversation.
The first, longer script included:
Harry and Emma talking about the book in more detail and harry noticing her name on the bookmark - emma was the confused by this as to why someone is talking to her due to her being so used to being ignored. It gets late and they have both missed the last train so Harry offers to walk her home, however it is about a 40 minute walk so emma tell him to just leave it and she will walk along but he replies with 'I've got time'. This is where we got the idea for our film title. The main dialogue after this was when harry and emma got to half way home for Emma and where she feels uncomfortable to walk the rest of the way home because she knows that her step dad will be angry and she doesn't want harry to see this. The conversation then takes a strange turn and harry becomes suspicious as to why she has suddenly changed her tone and got all up tight about things.
Conclusion
After looking at all the things that we were trying to achieve, we realized that realistically we would never be able to fit this into a two minute opening. In fact we noticed that we went into too much depth and that would in fact be about 10 - 20 minutes long which is quite a large section of the film.
We realized that all we really needed to fit into the opening was a little bit about Emma's life and the moment she meets harry leaving an enigma to know what happens after they have met.
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